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    Post My second Poem. '' [email protected]''

    I Smile on every night

    The Stars are shining bright

    Am Sitting down on this lonely night

    Asking God when Am I gonna hold her tight

    So i may Show her my love with all my might


    Every time I See couples love bliss

    Got my hands tied

    My mind dreaming of all the good times we could have

    Dancing on the dance floor



    Kissing while the rain poors

    Holding hands , and lifting you from the floor


    So many things in my head about you

    Hoping that all of them shall come true

    Just sitting drinking and dreaming

    Yeah, Yeah

    Its all in my head

    We would be listening to some beat

    Winding and grinding

    Until dawn rises up

    The room would be steamy

    You would look sexy

    Jourdan , forever you shall be my lovely lady

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    Dude that is fucking amazing.

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    Yeah that is one kick ass poem coming from me a person who dont even like them ^_^
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