[Poem] Long Distance Emo poem thingy

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    [Poem] Long Distance Emo poem thingy

    A million kisses that will never be..
    They all should be, but never will be..
    Every passing day from today
    Will be the day I love you more,
    Than today or yesterday or ever before,
    Words and phrases will never do,
    What my heart feels so greatly for you,
    The deeper and deeper i seem go ..
    My heart seems to grow...
    It grows and grows for the one i love
    The one i love is you and always will be you
    Its all about you..
    I want you here, forever and more,
    For our hearts to join and together to explore,
    I want our hearts beat and beat as one,
    I want to say to you my love
    Do you feel what i feel?
    You are so close in my heart..
    But in reality you are so far far away
    At times like this I wish ..
    I wish you were here and not up there,
    Yet life is hard as well as unfair,
    All I can do is wish and wait,
    Until we meet as that is our fate,
    I love you more than my words can say,
    And forever my love will grow each passing day,
    Every second i miss you more,
    I'd just hold you till you warm to the core.
    Until the day I gently hold your face,
    Kiss your lips than as we embrace..
    I will hold you close and feel your warmth,
    Kiss your cheek, whisper to your ear,
    Feel your soft skin beneath my hand,
    Feel your energy inside expand,
    I'll wish for that moment as I always do,
    I wish i wish that for moment
    And I've wished and wished, hoping my wish will come true..


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    Honestly, not a very good poem
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    If you critize something usually you leave the reason

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    A million kisses that will never be..
    They all should be, but never will be..
    Every passing day from today
    Will be the day I love you more,
    Than today or yesterday or ever before,
    Words and phrases will never do,

    Ehm. no disrespect risker, but i got lost ... "Will be should be ? Today day yesterday ." its just way to confusing to me. way to many be's and Day's got to confusing

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    Well.. whats its just trying to say


    Kisses that won't ever happen because we are so far away
    But every day that pasts by i still love you more then i can ever put into words or a sentences to tell you


    Understand?

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