[Poem] My Love

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    [Poem] My Love

    Kassy Leah Jones

    My Love For You

    The length to which I love you cannot be placed into words or sentences,
    It is impossible to count every reason why I love you.
    The depths in which my heart and soul holds you close couldn't be measured in kilometers or any other possible distance,
    Not even the most perfect of words could explain what you mean to me.
    There aren't enough words in existence to say how I feel about you when you tell me you love me and when I tell you I love you.
    It isn't possible to have a sentence that could capture the essence of my hearts desire to have you with me, beside me.
    But if there were a number, it would have to be past infinity.
    But if there were a distance, it would have to be past endless.
    But if there were words, they would have to be true love.
    And if there were a sentence to describe this, it would have to be "I love you forever and ever",
    You're perfect for me <3

    Marry me?


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    Tis my poem for my GF, havn't actually given it to her just yet but yea..



    And.. with the marry me thing.. no im not really asking her its just what we do xD

    CREDITS: Lordilson
    Thanks for the grammar corrections
    Last edited by risker; 03-23-2009 at 12:57 PM.

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    You haven't told me about kassy!!

    If there were a word, it would have to be true love.

    thats two words XD JK
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    Quote Originally Posted by dog_keeper View Post
    You haven't told me about kassy!!

    If there were a word, it would have to be true love.

    thats two words XD JK
    NICE POEM
    Rofl stfu

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    Nice poem. Could make some changes but it's really good without them. Keep up the good work.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lordilson View Post
    Nice poem. Could make some changes but it's really good without them. Keep up the good work.
    Such as?

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    Quote Originally Posted by risker View Post
    Such as?
    Well just really dropping a word here, adding something there. Nothing really that would change it dramatically. And i'd fix it up as in correct English but that's just me, a Grammar Nazi.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lordilson View Post
    Well just really dropping a word here, adding something there. Nothing really that would change it dramatically. And i'd fix it up as in correct English but that's just me, a Grammar Nazi.
    I wouldn't mind if you told me ..

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    Quote Originally Posted by risker View Post
    I wouldn't mind if you told me ..
    Alright, you asked =P

    Kassy Leah Jones

    My Love For You

    The length to which I love you cannot be placed into words or sentences,
    It is impossible to count every reason why I love you.
    The depths in which my heart and soul holds you close couldn't be measured in kilometers or any other possible distance,
    Not even the most perfect of words could explain what you mean to me.
    There aren't enough words in existence to say how I feel about you when you tell me you love me and when I tell you I love you.
    It isn't possible to have a sentence that could capture the essence of my hearts desire to have you with me, beside me.
    But if there were a number, it would have to be past infinity.
    But if there were a distance, it would have to be past endless.
    But if there were words, they would have to be true love.
    And if there were a sentence to describe this, it would have to be "I love you forever and ever",
    You're perfect for me <3

    Marry me?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lordilson View Post
    Alright, you asked =P

    Kassy Leah Jones

    My Love For You

    The length to which I love you cannot be placed into words or sentences,
    It is impossible to count every reason why I love you.
    The depths in which my heart and soul holds you close couldn't be measured in kilometers or any other possible distance,
    Not even the most perfect of words could explain what you mean to me.
    There aren't enough words in existence to say how I feel about you when you tell me you love me and when I tell you I love you.
    It isn't possible to have a sentence that could capture the essence of my hearts desire to have you with me, beside me.
    But if there were a number, it would have to be past infinity.
    But if there were a distance, it would have to be past endless.
    But if there were words, they would have to be true love.
    And if there were a sentence to describe this, it would have to be "I love you forever and ever",
    You're perfect for me <3

    Marry me?
    Ty

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    but i just gave it to her so fail
    But thanks

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