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    War Poem

    In the alliance harbor in Stormwind, People crowd the bay.
    No one knew
    No one could
    It shed like the spells of a mage.
    It killed like the night kills the day.

    Bloodshed was caused every waking moment.
    It almost seemed too unreal to be true
    The sky was wrapped in the withering darkness.
    Their drums and footsteps beat the ground that it scream "Murder..." through the city,
    The words ring in my mind like the voices I hear in this alliance medical bay..
    "Lok tar O'gar Warriors"...
    "Please, spare me! My mother is sick and I need to take care of her.."
    It all is a reality...



    I was there, watching everything and everybody..
    They died, they cried,
    Some spared? Not there.
    The axe chopping through the skin would have sickened you.
    Now a new word rings in my head..
    A word that I will never forget..
    A word that I cannot keep off of my mind
    My word..
    Our.. word..
    War



    How'd you guys like it? incase you didn't get the idea, this is about Orcs slaughtering Humans in the Stormwind Docks.
    Don't eat me Jolinar :<

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    You have some serious talent!

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    Thanks a lot! I am planning to make this one of my main forums! Lol
    Don't eat me Jolinar :<

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    Nice Poem!Gj..

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    Tyvm, Im suprised at only 2 comments(Excluding mine).
    Don't eat me Jolinar :<

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    really good! love your style of writing poems. !
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    Thank you very much!
    Don't eat me Jolinar :<

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    That was really great and very touchy liked it very much,Thanks for sharing,And your thought has also encoureged me to share mine favourite poem on anti-war.
    Hope you all liked it.

    I move among the dark cubicles that barely divide person from person that barely shield
    soul and heart as an unfurled umbrella from the press of rain.

    Power is nothing and everything to those without power, to those who waste in guilt
    and fear, who wander in routine.

    Why would a man want to be ruled when everything on earth is capricious and free?

    To such I say all that is forgotten is the same as all that is denied.

    Those who gossip and drink at the water cooler, who imagine themselves going to battle
    with lesser than they,

    those whose eyes drink too long on forms and applications, whose eyes rarely stray
    from the computer,

    those with ear pressed to the cell phone or fingers pressed to the palm pilot,

    those who stay too long at meetings, workshops, conferences;

    to them I say the soul agitates for renewal, for its place among all living creatures.

    I do not judge one man above another. One man’s shoulders are not higher than
    another man’s measure.

    Whether in lockstep or alone, I guarantee each a destiny.

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    That's a really good poem gj! You should write a small story on that maybe.
    Don't eat me Jolinar :<

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