Song by me

This is a discussion on Song by me within the General Chat board part of the General category; I made this song and I would like your opinion on it. Its short I know The sea carries you ...

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    Cool Song by me

    I made this song and I would like your opinion on it.
    Its short I know

    The sea carries you back and forth
    Nobody knows
    Where will it go
    Everybody waits
    To see the paradise
    But the sea doesn't give you up
    Not to the storm not to the sun
    It just carries you to the promised paradise

    Its a bit of a rough translation from my language.



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    Huge Song :o
    Woot

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    We want it in your language!!
    Let's eat Grandpa! - Let's eat, Grandpa!
    Punctuation, it saves lives.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AlexanderTheGreat View Post
    We want it in your language!!
    LoL
    I thought you would say that.

    More te nosi amo i tamo
    Niko to nezna
    Kamo će sad
    Svatko to čeka
    Da vidi taj raj
    Ali ono te neda
    Ni jugu ni buri
    Samo te nosi u taj obećani raj

    I hope you are happy now Alex.


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    It sounds better in English! D:
    Let's eat Grandpa! - Let's eat, Grandpa!
    Punctuation, it saves lives.

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