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    Poems I wrote

    Think

    Realization
    and comprehension
    unintentionally strike an unsound chord
    smothered, by society
    which matures into
    an exponential desire to comprehend
    the real reality, whom few of us delve into
    preferably safe in the cozy, the fake, and unstable
    Indoors. without ever
    looking, touching the tip of the Iceberg.

    herded by the shepherders
    who use the human emotion, of fear
    in the future, or even of now
    to nudge us into their so-called
    “social
    ideal”
    which few never break off of, and are
    triggered, startled
    into being
    by the painful welding of
    reincarnation
    to death

    And when one does break off
    do they Survive? do they Return?
    no. they realize, and comprehend
    the lonely hermit, the abuser, the mentally
    ill. the animals, the ants, the motes of dust
    suspended on a light beam
    above our heads
    Experienced the offering of true experience
    the Eye-opening kind, the potentially fatal
    the tragic, wherein triggers magic
    which pushes us to addiction
    addiction to realization
    anddiction comprehension
    .


    I do this sound therapy where I listening to music jumping to different frequencies, and I was told to express myself, either by writing stories/poems or drawing. I chose to write a few poems, and here they are. I tried to make everything have a deeper meaning, so if it doesn't make sense to you, re-read it, and hopefully you will

    Here are some more, try and guess what they're about:


    Mentally challenged

    Socially inept?
    so should they be kept
    from the inevitably met
    wherein they will undoubtedly
    flee, courtesy of the good Grim
    and/or the Key

    Untitled

    Speculations not a-miss
    But simply dis-missed
    As conspiracy theories,
    a lying label
    scheduled historys
    much like a needle
    in a needlestack

    edit: und one moar i just wrote




    mask

    so Do we must conform
    to one’s social norm
    or does one just perform
    when he is en forme
    and then morph
    after retiring
    to his dorm
    where he reviews and analyses
    his day gone past, dullingly fast
    and close his eyes to enter imagination
    through physical ignorance
    where the static is meaningful
    for the 12 hours till morn’
    where he misses mass
    and runs to classes fast
    to repeat, without a say
    dictated his fate
    as one
    would convey,
    or so they say.
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    Wow, nice. I really like the first one
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    another one

    difference

    difference between others
    can cripple a man
    with no better a comparison
    than to suffer unknowingly

    christened depression,
    prozac without use
    snuff the short fuse
    burning silently, buried slyly

    bloody wrists, questions a-many
    soon forgotten xcept for a chosen few
    "general" pediatrician, you say?
    bipolarity is just
    physical heresy

    we float in our own little worlds
    where we can look out but cannot be seen
    we wonder how different we really are
    and if we need/deserve a fixing, unanswered beings

    -

    this ones about how we're all unique, and even though we can be characterized physically, our brains and imaginations are all different, and that can cause someone to suffer because they have a problem with their body but cannot determine if it's normal or not because they have nothing to compare it to. The "bloody wrists" part is about how we wonder how and why people commit suicide, because it could have just been a more internal problem and we would never have known because they're unique and even though there are "guidelines" to general medicine, not everyone can be helped because niggers niggers niggers I cba to explain anymore
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    nice! good word usage!

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    nice!

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