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    German Help

    Can a native German speaker edit this text? It needs to be in imperfekt tense.

    Musik spielt eine wichtige Rolle in unserem Leben. Es hilft uns zu entspannen und kann sogar helfen, uns zu konzentrieren. Musik hat sich für eine lange Zeit, und es bei der Suche im Allgemeinen, kam ein großer Teil der ersten Komponisten aus Deutschland, Johann Sebastian Bach, Ludwig van Beethoven und Johannes Brahms, um nur einige zu nennen. Von den drei Bs, steht Johannes Brahms heraus die meisten. Er war schon immer eine wichtige Figur in meiner musikalischen Karriere.



    Im Jahr 1833 wurde Johannes Brahms in Hamburg geboren. Sein Vater, Johann Brahms war ein Musiker aus einer kleinen Stadt namens Dithmarschen. Johannes lernte verschiedene Instrumente wie ein Kind zu spielen, wie sein Vater gab ihm Musikunterricht. Er begann früh in seinem Leben zu komponieren, aber nicht schätzen seine Werke. Johannes wurde schnell bekannt, nach einer Konzertreise im Alter von neunzehn Jahren. Er reiste durch Europa Durchführung erster Linie in Wien, Österreich. Schließlich kaufte Johannes ein Haus in Wien und führte viele Musikgruppen und komponierte verschiedene Werke, darunter zwei Serenaden, vier Sinfonien, zwei Klavierkonzerte, ein Violinkonzert, ein Doppel-Konzert (für Violine und Violoncello) und zwei Begleiter Orchesterouvertüren. Wegen seiner Gabe der Musik, wurde er zum Ehrenbürger der Stadt Hamburg. Leider starb Brahms, Alter 63, an Krebs im April 1897 kurz nach Abschluss seines opus 121. Er ist in der Zentralfriedhof in Wien beigesetzt.

    Abschließend half Johannes Brahms Form Musik, klassische oder nicht, zu dem, was es heute ist. Während seiner Zeit, schrieb Brahms Stück für Stück der schönen Musik, moderne Musik lebendig gehalten. Ohne Komponisten wie ihn wäre die Qualität der Musik im Laufe der Jahre entweder nicht vorhanden, oder nicht hörenswert sein. Ich bin froh, dass Brahms so viele Jugendliche inspiriert, darunter auch ich, kreativ zu sein und verfolgen Sie die Welt der Musik, während die Fortsetzung ihrer Ausbildung.

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    I guess it would be easier if you post the english text, because some sentences are hard to understand, due to google translate.


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    Yeah, give the original English text and I'll translate it in a sec, this is like exactly what I studied haha.


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    It needs to be in imperfekt tense.
    I'm German and would totally fail here.. WOW

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    This is the general gist of the essay. Thanks for responding!

    Music plays an important role in our lives. It helps us to relax and can even help us to focus. Music has been around for a long time, and looking at it generally, a lot of the first composers were born in Germany; Johann Sebastian Bach, Ludwig van Beethoven and Johannes Brahms to name a few. Of the three Bs, Johannes Brahms stands out the most. He has always been an important figure in my musical career.

    In 1833 Johannes Brahms was born in Hamburg. His father, Johann Brahms was a musician from a small town called Dithmarschen. Johannes learned to play various instruments as a child, as his father gave him music lessons. He started early in his life to compose, but not appreciate his works. John quickly became known after a concert tour at the age of nineteen years. He traveled through Europe, performing primarily in Vienna, Austria. Johannes eventually bought a house in Vienna and led many musical groups and composed several works, including two serenades, four symphonies, two piano concertos, a violin concerto, a double concerto (for violin and cello) and two companion orchestral overtures. Because of his gift of music, he was made ​​an honorary citizen of the city of Hamburg. Unfortunately, Brahms, age 63, died of cancer in April 1897 shortly after completing his 121st opus. He is buried in the central cemetery in Vienna.

    In conclusion, Johannes Brahms helped shape music, classical or not, to what it is today. During his time, Brahms wrote piece after piece of beautiful music that kept modern music alive. Without composers like him, the quality of the music would either not exist, or would not be worth listening to. I am glad that Brahms inspired so many young people, including myself, to be creative and explore the musical world, while continuing their education.




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    i think we need to make such a thread where germans help the nongermans with german.
    I could use school help
    Jolinar already helped me a little tho

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    I know a few "sentences"

    ein bier zu danken
    Arzt?!
    Ich bin nicht so betrunken
    ich bin aus norwegen
    Barzahlung?
    wasser..

    I survived Berlin for 2 days..

    but the fun thing is that I had german in school.. what the fuck was I doing in school? -.-
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    Quote Originally Posted by Glupus View Post
    I know a few "sentences"

    ein bier zu danken
    Arzt?!
    Ich bin nicht so betrunken
    ich bin aus norwegen
    Barzahlung?
    wasser..

    I survived Berlin for 2 days..

    but the fun thing is that I had german in school.. what the fuck was I doing in school? -.-
    I had Spanish for 4 years in school and I can't even make a single proper sentence if it's not asking what their name is. I still got a decent grade because I added an "o" after swedish words because it was a "studying technique"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sio View Post
    I had Spanish for 4 years in school and I can't even make a single proper sentence if it's not asking what their name is. I still got a decent grade because I added an "o" after swedish words because it was a "studying technique"
    That explains why you're Sio.

    And by the way, I already submitted this essay so thanks for those who at least tried to help.




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    wtf is imperfect tense !?


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