Gaming Community
Forum
 
Go Back   D3scene > General > Literature
Register Blogs Live view Downloads Marketplace FAQ Members List Social Groups Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Philosophical Poem: Prison

This is a discussion on Philosophical Poem: Prison within the Literature forum part of the General category; Just wrote this all of a sudden, at midnight. I couldn't sleep, so I had an inspiration, and yeah, that's ...


Welcome on D3scene.com! Make sure to register - it's free and very quick! You have to register before you can post and participate in our discussions with 70000 other registered members. Downloads, user profiles and some forums can only be seen by registered members. After you create your free account you will be able to customize many options, you will have the full access to new hacks, latest cheats and last but not least will see no advertisements at all. We would love to see you around in our community!
Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1  
Old 06-22-2008, 07:00 PM
Jolinar's Avatar
<- not a little red yoshi

 
Join Date: May 2008
Posts: 1,067
Thanks: 77
Thanked 77 Times in 56 Posts
Reputation: 658
Rep Power: 5
Jolinar is a splendid one to beholdJolinar is a splendid one to beholdJolinar is a splendid one to beholdJolinar is a splendid one to beholdJolinar is a splendid one to beholdJolinar is a splendid one to behold
Send a message via ICQ to Jolinar Send a message via AIM to Jolinar Send a message via MSN to Jolinar Send a message via Yahoo to Jolinar Send a message via Skype™ to Jolinar
Philosophical Poem: Prison

Just wrote this all of a sudden, at midnight. I couldn't sleep, so I had an inspiration, and yeah, that's it :/ Ah and yeah, I'm not good at rhyming, so I stopped trying it.

Inside of someone else's
Body and mind,
I'm living my life
If you can call it life.

Depending all upon his goodwill,
Being controlled in everything.
I need His permission
To do anything.

Am I not a person?
Don't I have the right
to decide freely
what I do? who I am?

I meet all demands
By which an individual is defined:
Conscience and self-confidence,
Feelings and a free will.

I have a personality,
I can live on my own.
And though the possiblity is there
I am not given a body of my own.

For I am not found real
Only a far away part of His person and mind.
And so I will stay, live on
In my home (and prison).
Reply With Quote
D3scene
Welcome to D3scene - probably the best location for all Gamers.

To participate in our friendly environment you have to register. After completing registration you will have full access to all threads and features. We care about members and try to make your stay as pleasant as possible. We are unique with the following feature for members - you will not see a single Advertisement!


The best: registration is completely free. It will not cost you a single penny or harm you in any way. You will lose nothing except 1 minute of your time. So why not register? We would be happy to see you around!
  #2  
Old 08-07-2008, 01:04 AM
cheesemaster's Avatar
Addict

 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 60
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Reputation: 1
Rep Power: 3
cheesemaster is an unknown quantity at this point
nice poem I think the last line should be "in my home,my Prison lone
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 08-14-2008, 01:07 AM
xiN xiN is offline
The Almighty Frenchie

 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Six feet under
Posts: 1,688
Thanks: 8
Thanked 12 Times in 9 Posts
Reputation: 314
Rep Power: 4
xiN is a jewel in the roughxiN is a jewel in the roughxiN is a jewel in the roughxiN is a jewel in the rough
Beautiful.

I first was confused with the "His", but due to the "H" I thought it was "someone" on the first line.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 07-15-2009, 04:34 AM
Lepkokurac's Avatar
Wannabe Member

 
Join Date: Jan 2009
Location: Serbia
Posts: 16
Thanks: 2
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Reputation: 8
Rep Power: 1
Lepkokurac is an unknown quantity at this point
this soundz nice man ;}
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 08-08-2009, 10:04 AM
Chloe Sakuna's Avatar
Wannabe Member

 
Join Date: Aug 2009
Location: Minnesota, Japan, Deutschland!
Posts: 21
Thanks: 0
Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts
Reputation: 16
Rep Power: 1
Chloe Sakuna is on a distinguished road
Written wonderfully. What else is there to say?
Reply With Quote
D3scene
Welcome to D3scene - probably the best location for all Gamers.

To participate in our friendly environment you have to register. After completing registration you will have full access to all threads and features. We care about members and try to make your stay as pleasant as possible. We are unique with the following feature for members - you will not see a single Advertisement!


The best: registration is completely free. It will not cost you a single penny or harm you in any way. You will lose nothing except 1 minute of your time. So why not register? We would be happy to see you around!
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT +1. The time now is 02:36 AM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0 ©2009, Crawlability, Inc.
vBulletin style developed by Transverse Styles