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Philosophical Poem: Prison
This is a discussion on Philosophical Poem: Prison within the Literature forum part of the General category; Just wrote this all of a sudden, at midnight. I couldn't sleep, so I had an inspiration, and yeah, that's ...
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06-22-2008, 07:00 PM
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| Philosophical Poem: Prison Just wrote this all of a sudden, at midnight. I couldn't sleep, so I had an inspiration, and yeah, that's it :/ Ah and yeah, I'm not good at rhyming, so I stopped trying it. Inside of someone else's Body and mind, I'm living my life If you can call it life. Depending all upon his goodwill, Being controlled in everything. I need His permission To do anything. Am I not a person? Don't I have the right to decide freely what I do? who I am? I meet all demands By which an individual is defined: Conscience and self-confidence, Feelings and a free will. I have a personality, I can live on my own. And though the possiblity is there I am not given a body of my own. For I am not found real Only a far away part of His person and mind. And so I will stay, live on In my home (and prison).  |
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08-07-2008, 01:04 AM
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| nice poem I think the last line should be "in my home,my Prison lone |
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08-14-2008, 01:07 AM
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| Beautiful. I first was confused with the "His", but due to the "H" I thought it was "someone" on the first line.  |
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