[No Idea] diary of an Orc

ichsuger · #1 12-19-2008, 01:00 AM

I'm Running down the road with only the hatred in my eyes,
I see nothing but death, everything around me, is a reflection of myself.
The loss of something great is about to happen, once again.
The deep feeling of emptiness is tearing my soul apart,
Now nothing can stop me.
There's no light to show me the path, only the blood leads the way.
Even I know, at the end of the path of blood, there's more blood.

Version 2
I'm Running down the road with only the hatred in my eyes,
I see nothing but death, everything around me, is a reflection of myself.
The loss of something great is about to happen, once again.
The deep feeling of emptiness is tearing my soul apart,
Now nothing can stop me.
There's no light to show me the path, only the blood leads the way.
Even I know, at the end of the path, there would only be darkness, the darkness that tears me apart.

Tell me what you think

~~risker~~ · #2 12-19-2008, 02:40 AM

Thats good ^^

MaMuT · #3 12-19-2008, 07:35 PM

It's Really Good

I Should mb add the word "Horde" or "The Horde" somewhere

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USMC-Syndicate · #4 12-19-2008, 09:34 PM

Haha good stuff. But, I'm affraid to ask what else you do with your spare time o.o =P

~~risker~~ · #5 12-19-2008, 11:35 PM

I think we all know

ichsuger · #6 12-20-2008, 01:03 AM

I dont like ally's

~~risker~~ · #7 12-20-2008, 01:20 AM

Lol ver 2 is good ^^

~~Geroldo~~ · #8 07-13-2009, 02:07 AM

Good Stuff.

heraklinos · #9 11-16-2009, 12:25 AM

I really like this you truly pulled out some of the emotions that true orcs would probably feel by fighting war after war, trust me I feel bad for the people who fight in the army they are just like the orc in your literature.