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Old 07-12-2009, 07:14 AM
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[Poem] My Girl
Tashi Meric
My Girl

Feelings seem like they can come and they can go in the flash of an eye
but my love for this girl, this girl by the name of Tashi Meric.
She's my baby, she’s my girl.
She may not know this
but she is my world as of now and if I could,
I'd make her my wife without a second’s contemplation
I’m her sky and she’s my star, she's the star that I forever hold within my heart.
My love won't ever change I’m positive of that.
I'll love her till death do us part
The exact thing I shall say on our wedding day
and I'll continue loving her day in and day out.
I love you baby I really do <3
I will make this vow with you now that from here on in...
You will always have my heart and my life because you are my heart and you are my life.

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Nice working.
Wrote by yourself?
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Yea it was.
I wrote it
Night before last for my girlfriend ^^
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I really liked it. ^^

I wasn't so sure about the line "I'd make her my wife without a second’s contemplation"

Maybe it's just my personal hate for the word contemplation :/ but I think "I'd make her my wife without hesitation." sounds a bit better.

great otherwise. ^^
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I really liked it. ^^

I wasn't so sure about the line "I'd make her my wife without a second’s contemplation"

Maybe it's just my personal hate for the word contemplation :/ but I think "I'd make her my wife without hesitation." sounds a bit better.

great otherwise. ^^
agree
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I really liked it. ^^

I wasn't so sure about the line "I'd make her my wife without a second’s contemplation"

Maybe it's just my personal hate for the word contemplation :/ but I think "I'd make her my wife without hesitation." sounds a bit better.

great otherwise. ^^
I got stuck between picking them. xD
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No offense mate, it's very cute n such, but the poem straight out stink, if you can call it a poem

You might call it a love declaration, show it for her and get laid, but I wouldn't call it for a poem, for art, that is something that can be made up in matter of seconds and produced in a minute or two.

Cute nonetheless
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